I continue to not-suck

Did half an hour, jiggedy jig. I wound up doing more rewriting than I'd thought - boy, this part was in *rough* shape. It's looking pretty good so far, though. This section of the book is chock full of crazy events. Once it warms up, it just don't cool down. I just hope the first few chapters have enough suspense to hook a kid into wanting to read the rest.

Three hours down, twelve to go.