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Well, a lack of 'Net access last night caused me to procrastinate and not get any writing done. Boo! But I can proudly say that I caught up with myself today, even though it involved my making an ass out of myself TWICE in the NaNo chat. Rar. For the record, my copy/paste function sucks. I hate it and want it to die.

Anyway.

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19,032 / 50,000
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I still owe some comments. I suck. Tomorrow, while I'm at work, I'll probably get a chance at some point to do this thing, this thing called "replying to my freakin' comments". Now, I sleep. Perchance to dream.
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Over 2,000 words today! Still on / slightly ahead of schedule, still writing crap, still not caring. And as a side note, my novel now contains baby sasquatches and wingless faeries. Who could ask for more? (I'll totally reply to all the comments and posts I owe my faithful reader(s?) tomorrow. Tonight I just want to get to bed at a not-insane hour, thanks.)
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Woo! I'm on the ball! Barely ahead of it, even. At this rate, the going is good. I continue to be proud of myself for a diverse set of reasons involving both NaNo and School. My dishes, however? I fail at dishes. But that's okay. I'm a Writer.

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The day, she went fairly well. I got a hunk of writing done at work, meaning that I am still keeping up this amazing streak of meeting my word-count goal every day. I'm really liking this "write a little every day" business, ya know? Maybe I should look into doing this year round. Seems to me there's a website dedicated to the idea that everybody should write at least (or is it "exactly"?) 100 words a day, every day, for a year. Or something like that. Something to think about, anyway.

I actually don't think I'll post my writing this time around. This story is significantly less well-planned than last year's endeavour, which is a fact that rears its head in terms of the story's construction. Which is to say: ouch. Sometimes I know where I want the story to go, but getting it there is torture. Sometimes I actually DON'T know where I'm going, and I have to write through it, with varying levels of success.

Occasionally I fall into a groove, and it's all good. But I'm also just ploughing through events sometimes, just to get through them and move on. They ain't pretty. I have no delusions as to whether or not they're going to be permanent residents in my novel, shall we say. But they need to be there, at least for now. Otherwise I'll never get this freakin' thing written. The only way I can convince myself to write the shlock that this requires is to have the knowledge that I'm the only person who has to be tortured with reading it.

Which isn't to say that EVERYTHING SUCKS OMG, it's just a work in progress. It has potential, I think. Figuring out the best way to go at it will be the fun of editing the thing.

Anyway.


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As I said in the forums earlier:

"I have reached 10K! I am clearly some sort of omnipotent, god-like being!"

Time to back-up the novel and, uh, maybe sleep. Yeah. Sleep is good.
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Phew! I was starting to get the impression that I wouldn't get any writing done tonight. I've been okay on the productive-in-other-areas-of-my-life angle, minus the cleaning, but writing was starting to look like a lost cause. That's when I hopped onto the NaNoWriMo chat room and begged people for word wars. Man, they saved my life! Word wars: make them a part of YOUR novel experience.

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Yeehaw!

I'm so excited. I just wrapped up Chapter 3, also known as That Chapter In Which Da Cool Stuff Finally Happens, and I'm extra excited because I'm about to do something I Don't Normally Do. Namely, shift POV's. Gasp, shock! I know, ladies and gentlemen. What can I say, I'm a shit-disturber. No, really - I usually write short stories. Very I'm-In-This-Character's-Head-Yay short stories. So switching to the POV of another character is all exciting and stuff.

Actually, I think I'll have to write another chapter from this character's POV before the timeline will have moved forward enough for me to write from the other one. But that's okay. It WILL happen. Oh yes, it will. And it will be glorious. GLORIOUS!

Right, it's Friday, and I'm a geek and stayed home and wrote and read Psych and looked at "The Making of Indiana Jones" stuff. And I think I'll go to bed now. So. G'night.
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Ahoy! It's been a while. School came upon me, not unlike a storm of, um, books, but I have returned at long last.

NaNoWriMo is underway, and can you guess what I'm writing?


If you said, the sequel to that thing you wrote last year about 12-year-olds and aliens, you'd be correct! Well, sort of. It's a sequel in the sense that it takes place in the same town (to start with, anyway), but it involves different characters and an entirely different plot (12-year-olds and wizards.)

I might start posting here, though I'll probably disable comments because this is gonna be some baaaad stuff. Seriously. I don't want critiques, but that means I have to be willing to go without mindless praise, too. It's an ethical code of conduct that I came up with, oh, about ten seconds ago. Anyway, in case inquiring minds actually want to see it (and as an alternate means of backing it up), I'll probably stick some of it up here.

And because all the cool kids are using them, here's my wordcount expressed via a little slider thingie:

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I'm actually a little ahead of the game. Creepy! Let's hope I can keep this trend up as the month goes on. I'd originally thought I'd try to sprint and finish really early - I'm starting to think that just disciplining myself in order to reach a reasonable daily wordcount goal might be the better course of action. Besides, it can't hurt to insinuate that attitude into my system, both for NaNo and school projects in general.

But anyway. No more posting for now - I'll muse a bit more later. Time to get back to writing. And procrastinating - well, well earned procrastination.
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It's currently 3:15AM, early in my last shift of work this week. I am going to rewrite Chapter 3 of "Adventures in Boringville" today, starting at 3:30 and not bloody well stopping until it's DONE. At that happy point, I will post the first three chapters that I have edited for your viewing (read: ignoring) pleasure.


Challenges for this week:

As challenged to me by [livejournal.com profile] shloop:
Write what the narrator (first or third) believes is going to be a one-night stand, while it's obvious that the prospective partner is planning something entirely different. Can end in disaster, smut, or other. And by "something other" they can be a prostitute, or planning a business lunch, or thinking about stealing his kidneys - anything's up for grabs.

As challenged by me for [livejournal.com profile] shloop (and any other interested parties *cough*[livejournal.com profile] the_bookshelves*cough*):
Write a story that involves overcoming an obstacle. Literally. A physical obstacle that actually could exist in the real world that isn't a part of the main character.
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A few weeks ago I was musing with [livejournal.com profile] nezchan about getting back into sketching and drawing, something I have no instruction in but always enjoyed. We both loved the idea of creating an online illustrated story, something that captures that sense of wonder that stories do when you're a child.

Now, less than a month later, I find myself the illustrator of Under the Rose, a story about a girl who finds her way beneath a compass rose and into a new world. The art is simple - I'm approaching it with an eye for perspective and scale.

Please consider adding it to your friends list - a new page will be posted every Tuesday and Thursday at [livejournal.com profile] underrose, always under LJ-cut so as not to be obtrusive. It's bound to be an exciting journey - and hey, you might even be back home in time for lunch.

(crossposted from my journal, [livejournal.com profile] cassaclyzm)


Now - beat me if I don't post an update by the end of the night stating that I've started major overhaul work on my kids SF novel, will yas?
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Wow, talk about posting early in the week! Practically unheard of. I rushed this one a little, and I think I'll want to go back and re-work it to some degree. I'm surprised by how well it came out considering, though - I'd been sitting on the first 400 words or so for a few weeks, knowing what I wanted it to say and how I wanted it to play out, but just not feeling motivated to get it there. Well, today I decided to push myself and see if I could finish it by the end of my shift (45 minutes, give or take.) Boom, a story happened!

Like I said, it was a bit of a rush job and wasn't as detailed as I originally thought it might have to be, but I think I actually like it at the length it is now. Anyway, let me know what you think. (I made myself write this in third person - for some reason everything's been popping out in first, lately.)

(This is a challenge to write a story about "completion", as per [livejournal.com profile] shloop.)


Making Ends Meet - vignette, 1,300 words, first draft )
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If I was Anne Rice, I'd say that this story "poured out of me". But I'm not. So instead I'll say that the first line popped into my head, and the rest of the story sort of, uh, happened to follow suit. It was fun to write, which was the most important thing at the time, though it wasn't for any challenge in particular. I'll get right on those, honest.


Mother Knows Best - vignette, 1,000 words, first draft )


What's with me and first person narratives lately?
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Did a leeeeeetle bit of writing on the time capsule challenge tonight, which I appended to this post. I'm having a really hard time getting into a writing groove lately. I think I need something frilly and froofy and non-committal to work on, or something. Maybe that'll help jump start my creativity. Other than that, I'm going to make sure I write something every day, even if it's only a little snippit. Feeling somewhat accomplished and Not Like A Failure is good motivation.

Starting next week (after having finished both the "time capsule" and "completion" challenge) I think I'm going to shift my focus somewhat and do some serious work on That Dang Alien Novel. I really want to have it in a somewhat readable state for the end of the summer. I'm still going to aim to have something new posted every week, even if it's just a vignette here and there, but Doing My Damn Editing needs to be top priority while I have a chance (read: before school starts.)
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[Edit: January 11th, 2007 - this story is featured as a "demo" story on Critique Circle, along with the crits that it received. Pretty cool, eh? For anyone looking for a great place to get feedback on fiction (both short and long), CC is a wonderful resource.]


I can't remember exactly what the deadline was for this, but I'm pretty sure I passed it. Boo. Anyway, here it is - a concept challenge from [livejournal.com profile] eternalism to write a story involving a hurricane. It was a fun little snippit to write.

Post Haste - Vignette, 650 words )

And now, challenges for the week of 07/10:

[livejournal.com profile] shloop and [livejournal.com profile] eternalism: Write a story involving a time capsule. (I figure, why not give multiple people the same challenge? It's fun to see what different directions the same prompt can go in.)
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This is probably the hardest piece of writing I've ever turned out. I had the idea for this story half a year or so ago, but found it too intimidating. It involves a character I'm very familiar with, which is a daunting thing in and of itself - I'm afraid that I'm trying to impart too much about this character to the reader. It's written in first person, which may or may not help in that respect.

Unhealthy Attraction - Short Story, 3,500 words )


Crit Notes: The most important thing I'm looking for in a crit is for this story is: does the story make sense? Is there anything the characters say or allude to that has you going, "Huh?" If so, please tell me, and if you can, tell me why. Comments about the writing itself are also appreciated, as always. Think it could be handled differently for better effect? Let me know!

Phew. This one's definitely a weight off my shoulders. Now to work on [livejournal.com profile] eternalism's challenge. It'd be nice to finish it tonight so I can have a clear Birthday weekend (woohoo!)
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It's currently 3AM. I'd like to make a fairly concentrated effort to finish my project for [livejournal.com profile] crimsonata sometime around 7AM. So this is me, making a journal entry that I'll update with my progress every hour, on the hour, so as to not get totally off-track like I'm prone to do.

Edit the First - When we last left our heroes... )

Edit the Second - Some progress, slow and painful though it may be... )

Edit the Third - Ever wonder if a novel would be easier? )

Edit the Fourth - What is this 'writing' of which you speak? )

Edit the Fifth - Hey! I can write! What a novel concept! )
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I'm getting behind myself. Boo. I suck. Actually, I'm working on a story at the moment that I'm having a lot of fun with - a project for [livejournal.com profile] crimsonata, which is due today or tomorrow... basically whenever I finish it. I'll post that when I'm done with it. For a first draft I'm really happy with it so far (it's sitting at just over a thousand words right now). It should be somewhere around 3,000 when I'm done with it, I hope.

Anyway, for my last June weekly post I'm going to copout again (and embarass myself a little - but not too much) and post part of an older story. This one's only about a year old. This was a first draft, edited to death at the time but old enough now that I'm cringing at it. (Probably a good sign. C'mon, cringe with me!) Still, there are some things about it that I like, the "dude dialogue" in particular. It might be worth revisiting at some point.

The main character, Jon, tells the story in first person. He is so totally the most heterosexual character I've ever written. He practically oozes it. So of course this story exists mostly to freak him out. We join our heroes in Chapter 3, where then find themselves in a gay bar, pretty much for shits and giggles. He's a bit toasted and has just knocked a girl over on the dance floor, though the chapter starts off with his mental rambling.


Just What You Weren't Looking For [Excerpt - Chapter 3], 2,500 words, first draft )

Oh, and [livejournal.com profile] eternalism? I'll have your "hurricane" story sometime within the next few days. A'ight?
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Well, I sure am getting behind myself! Here we are, technically the week of 06/26, and I haven't posted a piece for the week of 06/19 yet. Bother.

Seeing as how it's 7AM on my first night back to work (read: no sleep for me), I'm not exactly of a mind to write anything. So instead I think I'll repost a story I wrote two, maybe three years ago. I haven't edited it since then - this is still the first draft.

I was going for a fable-like feel, which is unlike everything I usually write. For that reason I always find this story somewhat refreshing to read. The language is so simple and broad and general and clear. Usually I struggle not to over-word. There are some things I'd like to tighten up and themes I'd like to expand on, and I think I need to tweak the overall writing style somewhat before I'll be happy with it. But for now, I present it to you in its original state.


The Wedding Bed - Fable, 1,400 words, first draft )
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Well, I'm late, but late is better than never, eh? This post is actually for last week. I told myself that if I didn't have a piece of writing to post by the end of tonight, I'd have to post some of my own poetry. Now that's motivation for you.

This is a really short piece, written in 15 minutes for [livejournal.com profile] daily15. It's only been marginally edited, and it's really more of a speculative/character piece than a story. It also doesn't really have a resolution, but I'm not sure where I'm going with it, so maybe it never will.

Anyway, as always, all comments are welcome.


Shadow of a Man - Vignette, 350 words )
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Whoops! I almost forgot that I need to post a piece of writing this week. Hmm. Maybe I'll dig up something that I already have written, but that needs some editing. I'd also like to get started on the project proposal for [livejournal.com profile] crimsonata - to write a story about a) a fight, b) a reunion or c) a sudden death, and to have the events take place within a 24 hour period. (But I think that one will be a couple of weeks in the works.)

Y'know what would make my day? If y'all would have a look at the stories I've posted over the past year or so (sad few that they are) and leave me a comment to let me know you read it. Even just "read it!" would do, if you don't want to feel pressured to tell me whether or not it sucked. (Which they do, but... y'know. How much?)
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Can I just take a minute to gripe about a pet peeve?

If someone is asking for criticism and they say, "Please don't pay attention to the grammar and spelling, (insert lame reason here)," I can't help but start to get just a tiny bit skeptical as to the overall storytelling ability that this person is about to display. I mean, okay, spelling? Sure. I suck at spelling. Go spell words wrong. If it's really too much work to run it through a word processor for a spell check, fine.

But grammar? Sorry - if you didn't get it right the first time, I get the feeling the second time around isn't going to be too much more kind to ya, if you know what I mean. Maybe I'm wrong, maybe there are people out there who can write stories while lacking the most basic skill that one requires to be able to write, but I sort of doubt it.

If you haven't bothered to, y'know, even read the story back to yourself once, don't post it for public criticism, m'kay? Your readers deserve a better product to work with than that. And so do you.

You may now return to your regularly scheduled friends list. Have a great day.
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[EDIT: January 11, 2007 - My main issue with this one is the "so, what?" factor, and the overly simplistic ending. I think there's a nugget of a fun relationship here, but I'm not sure how well this fragment of a story explores that. As with a lot of my work, I feel that there's an uncomfortable balance here between being "concise" and "simplistic". I want to get deeper than what a story of this length allows me.]


I don't really have a title for this one - it was written as a response to a prompt in [livejournal.com profile] crimsonata to write a story involving a diamond. (Yes, I came up with that prompt. Shut up.) So for now it's called "Diamonds". Original, I know. If I do anything else with it, maybe I'll come up with a better title.

As is usual for me, this story is contained within a single dialogue-heavy "scene". It feels a little thin right now, but I wanted to keep it short. Ideas on how/where to expand on it would be appreciated, as well as any feedback at all (as always).


Diamonds - Vignette, 800 words )
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